My Excuse Monday

Poking fun at the but in all of us...

Printed with permission of Sam Morrison

My First Kiss

Not my first kiss, but my hero and heroine's. I entered RWA's First Kiss competition (you submit the scene the first kiss occurs in) and I have just received my results.

Overall the judges liked my entry. There was no one place which pulled me down. Some common ground between the judges was:

• my characterisation is good
• my writing's very visual
• the internal thoughts of my hero slow it down (less thinking, more feeling needed)

I'll leave you with my favourite comment: I feel this writer's imagination is an asset to her writing career.

My Excuse Monday

Poking fun at the but in all of us...

Printed with permission of Sam Morrison